Grammar fixes

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@467 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

preface/organization.xml

@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 
 <para>
 This book is divided into the following parts. Although there is a lot
-of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read it
-and, not to mention, the easiest way for me to maintain the book.
+of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read
+it.
 </para>
 
 &pf-oz-organpart1;

preface/organpart1.xml

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 <para>
 Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where
-to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me).
+to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us).
 It also explains a few important aspects a user really wants and needs to
 read before starting to build an LFS system.
 </para>

preface/organpart2.xml

@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 
 <para>
 Part Two guides through the installation of the LFS system which will 
-be the foundation for the rest of the system. Whatever a user
-chooses to do with his brand new LFS system, it will be built on the
-foundation that's installed in this part.
+be the foundation for the rest of the system. Whatever you choose to do 
+with his brand new LFS system, it will be built on the foundation 
+that's installed in this part.
 </para>
 
 </sect2>