Text corrections:

* replaced a capital "The" in the middle of a sentence with "the"
* added "commands" to "by running the following:"
* rephrased one sentence to make it sound a bit more logical


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chapter05/pwdgroup.xml

@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
 login, there needs to be an entry in the /etc/passwd and /etc/group file. 
 Besides the group root, a couple of other groups are recommended and needed by
 packages. The groups with their GID's below aren't part of any standard.
-The LSB only recommends besides a group root a group bin to be present
-with GID 1. Other group names and GID's can be chosen by the user. Well
+The LSB only recommends a group bin with GID 1 to be present besides 
+group root. Other group names and GID's can be chosen by the user. Well
 written packages don't depend on GID numbers but just use the group
-name, since it doesn't matter which GID a group has. Since there
-aren't any standards for groups The groups created here are the groups the
+name, so it doesn't matter which GID a group has. Since there
+aren't any standards for groups the groups created here are the groups the
 MAKEDEV script (the script that creates the device files in the /dev
 directory) mentions.</para>
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ following command:</para>
 <para><screen><userinput>echo "root:x:0:0:root:/root:/bin/bash" &gt; $LFS/etc/passwd</userinput></screen></para>
 
 <para>Create a new file <filename>$LFS/etc/group</filename> by running the
-following:</para>
+following command:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>cat &gt; $LFS/etc/group &lt;&lt; "EOF"</userinput>
 root:x:0: