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* Minor wording/typo fixes

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Matthew Burgess 20 年之前
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      chapter01/changelog.xml
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      chapter07/udev.xml

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chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -83,6 +83,9 @@ first a summary, then a detailed log.</para>
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Allard Welter)
+</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>April 16, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording/typo fixes (Peter Ennis)
 </para></listitem>
 

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chapter07/udev.xml

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ created each time the system boots, they will be stored on a
 <systemitem class="filesystem">ramfs</systemitem> (a file system that
 resides entirely in memory and does not take up any disk space).
 Device nodes do not require much disk space, so the memory that is
-used in negligable.</para>
+used in negligible.</para>
 
 <sect2>
 <title>History</title>
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ immediately accessible.</para>
 <sect2>
 <title>Handling Hotpluggable/Dynamic Devices</title>
 
-<para>When you plug in a device, such a Universal Serial Bus (USB) MP3 player, the kernel
+<para>When you plug in a device, such as a Universal Serial Bus (USB) MP3 player, the kernel
 recognizes that the device is now connected and generates a hotplug
 event. If the driver is already loaded (either because it was compiled
 into the kernel or because it was loaded via the