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Bruce Dubbs 15 жил өмнө
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chapter01/changelog.xml

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     <listitem>
       <para>2010-05-03</para>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[bdubbs] - Made minor text changes in Chapter 5, gawk
+          and Chapter 6, patch.
+          Thanks to Chris Staub.
+          Fixes <ulink url="&lfs-ticket-root;2649">#2649</ulink>.</para>
+        </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Made several text changes in Section v,
           Rationale for Packages in the Book. Thanks to Chris 

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chapter05/gawk.xml

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     suite is not mandatory for the temporary tools here in this chapter. To run
     the Gawk test suite anyway, issue the following command:</para>
 
-    <para>To test the results, issue:</para>
-
 <screen><userinput remap="test">make check</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Install the package:</para>

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chapter06/patch.xml

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   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Patch</title>
 
-    <para>Apply a patch to prevent a test that requires <command>ed</command>
-    from being run:</para>
+    <para>Apply a patch to prevent a the testsuite from running a test that
+    requires <command>ed</command>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">patch -Np1 -i ../&patch-test-patch;</userinput></screen>