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appendixa/autoconf-desc.xml

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ have autoconf.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>autoheader</title>
 <sect4><title>autoheader</title>
 <para>The autoheader program can create a template file of C #define
 <para>The autoheader program can create a template file of C #define
-statements for configure to use</para></sect4>
+statements for configure to use.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>autoreconf</title>
 <sect4><title>autoreconf</title>
 <para>If there are a lot of autoconf-generated configure scripts, the
 <para>If there are a lot of autoconf-generated configure scripts, the

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appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ template</para></sect3>
 <sect4><title>checkfs</title>
 <sect4><title>checkfs</title>
 <para>The checkfs script checks the file systems just before they are
 <para>The checkfs script checks the file systems just before they are
 mounted (with the exception of journal and network based file
 mounted (with the exception of journal and network based file
-systems)</para></sect4>
+systems).</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>cleanfs</title>
 <sect4><title>cleanfs</title>
 <para>The cleanfs script removes files that shouldn't be preserved between
 <para>The cleanfs script removes files that shouldn't be preserved between

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appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml

@@ -14,12 +14,12 @@ partition).</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>chattr</title>
 <sect4><title>chattr</title>
 <para>chattr changes the file attributes on a Linux second extended file
 <para>chattr changes the file attributes on a Linux second extended file
-system. </para></sect4>
+system.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>compile_et</title>
 <sect4><title>compile_et</title>
 <para>compile_et is used to convert a table listing error-code names
 <para>compile_et is used to convert a table listing error-code names
 and associated messages into a C source file suitable for use with the 
 and associated messages into a C source file suitable for use with the 
-com_err library</para></sect4>
+com_err library.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>debugfs</title>
 <sect4><title>debugfs</title>
 <para>The debugfs program is a file system debugger. It can be used  to examine 
 <para>The debugfs program is a file system debugger. It can be used  to examine 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ extended filesystems. fsck.ext2 does the same as e2fsck.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>e2image</title>
 <sect4><title>e2image</title>
 <para>e2image is used to save critical ext2 filesystem data to 
 <para>e2image is used to save critical ext2 filesystem data to 
-a file</para></sect4>
+a file.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>e2label</title>
 <sect4><title>e2label</title>
 <para>e2label will display or change the filesystem label on the ext2 
 <para>e2label will display or change the filesystem label on the ext2 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ file system.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>fsck.ext3</title>
 <sect4><title>fsck.ext3</title>
 <para>fsck.ext3 is used to check and optionally repair a Linux ext3 
 <para>fsck.ext3 is used to check and optionally repair a Linux ext3 
-filesystems</para></sect4>
+filesystems.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>lsattr</title>
 <sect4><title>lsattr</title>
 <para>lsattr lists the file attributes on a second extended 
 <para>lsattr lists the file attributes on a second extended 

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appendixa/groff-desc.xml

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ into commands that are understood  by  troff.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>tfmtodit</title>
 <sect4><title>tfmtodit</title>
 <para>tfmtodit creates a font file for use with <userinput>groff
 <para>tfmtodit creates a font file for use with <userinput>groff
--Tdvi</userinput></para></sect4>
+-Tdvi</userinput>.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>troff</title>
 <sect4><title>troff</title>
 <para>troff is highly compatible with Unix troff. Usually it should be invoked 
 <para>troff is highly compatible with Unix troff. Usually it should be invoked 

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appendixa/gzip-desc.xml

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Lempel-Ziv coding (LZ77).</para></sect4>
 <sect4><title>zcat</title>
 <sect4><title>zcat</title>
 <para>zcat uncompresses either a list of files on the command line or its 
 <para>zcat uncompresses either a list of files on the command line or its 
 standard input and writes the uncompressed data on 
 standard input and writes the uncompressed data on 
-standard output</para></sect4>
+standard output.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>zcmp</title>
 <sect4><title>zcmp</title>
 <para>zcmp invokes the cmp program on compressed files.</para></sect4>
 <para>zcmp invokes the cmp program on compressed files.</para></sect4>

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appendixa/kbd-desc.xml

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ mapping table into the console driver. Note that it is obsolete and that its
 features are built into setfont.</para></sect4>
 features are built into setfont.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>openvt</title>
 <sect4><title>openvt</title>
-<para>openvt starts a program on a new virtual terminal (VT)</para></sect4>
+<para>openvt starts a program on a new virtual terminal (VT).</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>psfaddtable, psfgettable, psfstriptable, psfxtable</title>
 <sect4><title>psfaddtable, psfgettable, psfstriptable, psfxtable</title>
 <para>These are a set of tools for handling Unicode character tables for 
 <para>These are a set of tools for handling Unicode character tables for 

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appendixa/nettools-desc.xml

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ name.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>hostname</title>
 <sect4><title>hostname</title>
 <para>hostname is used to set or show the system's
 <para>hostname is used to set or show the system's
-hostname</para></sect4>
+hostname.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>ifconfig</title>
 <sect4><title>ifconfig</title>
 <para>The ifconfig command is the general command used to configure network
 <para>The ifconfig command is the general command used to configure network
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ interfaces.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>nameif</title>
 <sect4><title>nameif</title>
 <para>nameif names network interfaces based on MAC
 <para>nameif names network interfaces based on MAC
-addresses</para></sect4>
+addresses.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>netstat</title>
 <sect4><title>netstat</title>
 <para>netstat is a multi-purpose tool used to print the network connections, 
 <para>netstat is a multi-purpose tool used to print the network connections, 

+ 2 - 2
appendixa/procps-desc.xml

@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@ kernel.</para></sect4>
 <para>ps gives a snapshot of the current processes.</para></sect4>
 <para>ps gives a snapshot of the current processes.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>pgrep</title>
 <sect4><title>pgrep</title>
-<para>pgrep looks up processes based on name and other attributes</para></sect4>
+<para>pgrep looks up processes based on name and other attributes.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>pkill</title>
 <sect4><title>pkill</title>
-<para>pkill signals processes based on name and other attributes</para></sect4>
+<para>pkill signals processes based on name and other attributes.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>skill</title>
 <sect4><title>skill</title>
 <para>skill sends signals to process matching a criteria.</para></sect4>
 <para>skill sends signals to process matching a criteria.</para></sect4>

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appendixa/reiserfs-desc.xml

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ of any reiserfs filesystem found on the device.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>resize_reiserfs</title>
 <sect4><title>resize_reiserfs</title>
 <para>resize_reiserfs is used to resize an unmounted reiserfs file 
 <para>resize_reiserfs is used to resize an unmounted reiserfs file 
-system</para></sect4>
+system.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>unpack</title>
 <sect4><title>unpack</title>
 <para>No description is currently available.</para></sect4>
 <para>No description is currently available.</para></sect4>

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appendixa/shadowpwd-desc.xml

@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ user login shells.</para></sect4>
 maintains failure counts and limits.</para></sect4>
 maintains failure counts and limits.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>gpasswd</title>
 <sect4><title>gpasswd</title>
-<para>gpasswd is used to administer the /etc/group file</para></sect4>
+<para>gpasswd is used to administer the /etc/group file.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>groupadd</title>
 <sect4><title>groupadd</title>
 <para>The groupadd command creates a new group account using the values 
 <para>The groupadd command creates a new group account using the values 

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appendixa/shellutils-desc.xml

@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ integer numbers.</para></sect4>
 host.</para></sect4>
 host.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>hostname</title>
 <sect4><title>hostname</title>
-<para>hostname sets or prints the name of the current host system</para></sect4>
+<para>hostname sets or prints the name of the current host system.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>id</title>
 <sect4><title>id</title>
 <para>id prints the real and effective UIDs and GIDs of a user or the current
 <para>id prints the real and effective UIDs and GIDs of a user or the current
@@ -61,14 +61,14 @@ user.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>nohup</title>
 <sect4><title>nohup</title>
 <para>nohup runs a command immune to hangups, with output to a 
 <para>nohup runs a command immune to hangups, with output to a 
-non-tty</para></sect4>
+non-tty.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>pathchk</title>
 <sect4><title>pathchk</title>
 <para>pathchk checks whether file names are valid or portable.</para></sect4>
 <para>pathchk checks whether file names are valid or portable.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>pinky</title>
 <sect4><title>pinky</title>
 <para>pinky is a lightweight finger utility which retrieves information about
 <para>pinky is a lightweight finger utility which retrieves information about
-a certain user</para></sect4>
+a certain user.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>printenv</title>
 <sect4><title>printenv</title>
 <para>printenv prints all or part of the environment.</para></sect4>
 <para>printenv prints all or part of the environment.</para></sect4>
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ a certain user</para></sect4>
 function).</para></sect4>
 function).</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>pwd</title>
 <sect4><title>pwd</title>
-<para>pwd prints the name of the current/working directory</para></sect4>
+<para>pwd prints the name of the current/working directory.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>seq</title>
 <sect4><title>seq</title>
 <para>seq prints numbers in a certain range with a certain 
 <para>seq prints numbers in a certain range with a certain 
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ increment.</para></sect4>
 <para>stty changes and prints terminal line settings.</para></sect4>
 <para>stty changes and prints terminal line settings.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>su</title>
 <sect4><title>su</title>
-<para>su runs a shell with substitute user and group IDs</para></sect4>
+<para>su runs a shell with substitute user and group ID's.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>tee</title>
 <sect4><title>tee</title>
 <para>tee reads from standard input and writes to standard output and 
 <para>tee reads from standard input and writes to standard output and 

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appendixa/texinfo-desc.xml

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ added.</para></sect4>
 formats.  Available formats are: info files, plain text and HTML.</para></sect4>
 formats.  Available formats are: info files, plain text and HTML.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>texi2dvi</title>
 <sect4><title>texi2dvi</title>
-<para>The texi2dvi program prints Texinfo documents</para></sect4>
+<para>The texi2dvi program prints Texinfo documents.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>texindex</title>
 <sect4><title>texindex</title>
 <para>The texindex program is used to sort Texinfo index files.</para></sect4>
 <para>The texindex program is used to sort Texinfo index files.</para></sect4>

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appendixa/utillinux-desc.xml

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ and write</para></sect3>
 
 
 <sect4><title>blockdev</title>
 <sect4><title>blockdev</title>
 <para>blockdev allows to call block device ioctls from the command 
 <para>blockdev allows to call block device ioctls from the command 
-line</para></sect4>
+line.</para></sect4>
 
 
 <sect4><title>cal</title>
 <sect4><title>cal</title>
 <para>cal displays a simple calender.</para></sect4>
 <para>cal displays a simple calender.</para></sect4>

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chapter01/acknowledgements.xml

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ mirrors, and for his donation of a P4-2.2GHz system to the LFS
 project.</para></listitem>
 project.</para></listitem>
 
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.mirror.ac.uk">UK Mirror
 <listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.mirror.ac.uk">UK Mirror
-Service</ulink> for running the linuxfromscratch.mirror.co.uk mirror</para></listitem>
+Service</ulink> for running the linuxfromscratch.mirror.co.uk mirror.</para></listitem>
 
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:guido@primerelay.net">Guido
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:guido@primerelay.net">Guido
 Passet</ulink> &lt;guido@primerelay.net&gt; for running the
 Passet</ulink> &lt;guido@primerelay.net&gt; for running the
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ initial design of the LFS website.</para></listitem>
 
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:garrett@linux.com">Garrett
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:garrett@linux.com">Garrett
 LeSage</ulink> &lt;garrett@linux.com&gt; for creating the LFS 
 LeSage</ulink> &lt;garrett@linux.com&gt; for creating the LFS 
-banner</para></listitem>
+banner.</para></listitem>
 
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:dean@vipersoft.co.uk">Dean
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:dean@vipersoft.co.uk">Dean
 Benson</ulink> &lt;dean@vipersoft.co.uk&gt; for helping out financially
 Benson</ulink> &lt;dean@vipersoft.co.uk&gt; for helping out financially

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chapter03/creatingpart.xml

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ installed. This is not recommended if it is the first time you try LFS,
 but may be useful if you are short on disk space. If you feel brave, take 
 but may be useful if you are short on disk space. If you feel brave, take 
 a look at the <emphasis>Install LFS next to existing systems on the same
 a look at the <emphasis>Install LFS next to existing systems on the same
 partition</emphasis> hint at <ulink 
 partition</emphasis> hint at <ulink 
-url="&hints-root;lfs_next_to_existing_systems.txt"/></para>
+url="&hints-root;lfs_next_to_existing_systems.txt"/>.</para>
 
 
 <para>Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
 <para>Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
 partition on which we can build our new system. We recommend a partition size
 partition on which we can build our new system. We recommend a partition size

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chapter04/autoconf.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 Autoconf (&autoconf-version;) - &autoconf-size;:
 Autoconf (&autoconf-version;) - &autoconf-size;:
 <ulink url="&ftp;/autoconf-&autoconf-version;.tar.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&ftp;/autoconf-&autoconf-version;.tar.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&http;/autoconf-&autoconf-version;.tar.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&http;/autoconf-&autoconf-version;.tar.bz2"/>
-

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chapter04/bash.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 Bash (&bash-version;) - &bash-size;:
 Bash (&bash-version;) - &bash-size;:
 <ulink url="&ftp;/bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&ftp;/bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&http;/bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&http;/bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2"/>
-

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chapter04/tar-patch.xml

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 Tar Patch (&tar-version;) - &tar-patch-size;:
 Tar Patch (&tar-version;) - &tar-patch-size;:
 <ulink url="&ftp;/tar-1.13.patch.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&ftp;/tar-1.13.patch.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&http;/tar-1.13.patch.bz2"/>
 <ulink url="&http;/tar-1.13.patch.bz2"/>
-

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chapter05/bash-exp.xml

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
 
 <para><userinput>--enable-static-link:</userinput> This configure 
 <para><userinput>--enable-static-link:</userinput> This configure 
-option causes Bash to be linked statically</para>
+option causes bash to be linked statically.</para>
 
 
 <para><userinput>--prefix=$LFS/usr:</userinput> This configure option installs 
 <para><userinput>--prefix=$LFS/usr:</userinput> This configure option installs 
 all of Bash's files under the $LFS/usr directory, which becomes the /usr 
 all of Bash's files under the $LFS/usr directory, which becomes the /usr 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ partition which has to be mounted at some point. Before that partition is
 mounted you need and will want to have bash available (it will be hard to 
 mounted you need and will want to have bash available (it will be hard to 
 execute the boot scripts without a shell for instance).</para>
 execute the boot scripts without a shell for instance).</para>
 
 
-<para><userinput>--with-curses:</userinput> This causes Bash to be 
+<para><userinput>--with-curses:</userinput> This causes bash to be
 linked against the curses library instead of the default termcap 
 linked against the curses library instead of the default termcap 
 library which is becoming obsolete.</para>
 library which is becoming obsolete.</para>
 
 
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ library which is becoming obsolete.</para>
 against libncurses (it can link against a static termcap for the time
 against libncurses (it can link against a static termcap for the time
 being just fine because we will reinstall Bash in chapter 6 anyways,
 being just fine because we will reinstall Bash in chapter 6 anyways,
 where we will use libncurses), but it's a good test to make sure that
 where we will use libncurses), but it's a good test to make sure that
-the ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
+the Ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
 trouble later on in this chapter when you install the Texinfo package.
 trouble later on in this chapter when you install the Texinfo package.
-That package requires ncurses and termcap can't reliably be used
+That package requires ncurses, and termcap can't reliably be used
 there.</para>
 there.</para>
 
 
 <para><userinput>ln -sf bash $LFS/bin/sh:</userinput> This command creates
 <para><userinput>ln -sf bash $LFS/bin/sh:</userinput> This command creates
@@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ in the scripts) which invokes a special bash mode. Bash will then behave
 (as closely as possible) as the original Bourne shell.</para>
 (as closely as possible) as the original Bourne shell.</para>
 
 
 <para>The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
 <para>The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
-the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists 
+the next command to be executed only if the previous command exits
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
-commands are copy&amp;pasted on the shell, it is important to be ensured
-that if ./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make
-fails, that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.</para>
+commands are copy&amp;pasted on the shell, it is important to ensure
+that if ./configure fails, make isn't executed and, likewise, if make
+fails, that make install isn't executed, and so forth.</para>
 
 
 </sect2>
 </sect2>
 
 

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chapter05/bash-inst.xml

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ your distribution has the <filename>/usr/lib/libcurses.a</filename> and
 distribution is an LFS system, all files will be present if you followed
 distribution is an LFS system, all files will be present if you followed
 the instructions of the book version you read exactly.</para>
 the instructions of the book version you read exactly.</para>
 
 
-<para>If both of the files are missing, you have to install the ncurses 
+<para>If both of the files are missing, you have to install the Ncurses
 development package. This package is often called something like 
 development package. This package is often called something like 
-<emphasis>ncurses-dev</emphasis>. If this package is already installed, 
+<emphasis>Ncurses-dev</emphasis>. If this package is already installed,
 or you just installed it, check for the two files again. Often the 
 or you just installed it, check for the two files again. Often the 
 <filename>libcurses.a</filename> file is (still) missing. If so, then 
 <filename>libcurses.a</filename> file is (still) missing. If so, then 
 create <filename>libcurses.a</filename> as a symlink by running the 
 create <filename>libcurses.a</filename> as a symlink by running the 

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chapter07/hosts.xml

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ IP-address range. Valid ranges are:</para>
 	C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen></para>
 	C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen></para>
 
 
 <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this IP could
 <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this IP could
-be www.linuxfromscratch.org</para>
+be www.linuxfromscratch.org.</para>
 
 
 <para>If you aren't going to use a network card, you still need to 
 <para>If you aren't going to use a network card, you still need to 
 come up with a FQDN. This is necessary for certain programs to operate
 come up with a FQDN. This is necessary for certain programs to operate