Rewording

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8680 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 
   <note>
     <para>The LFS LiveCD might not work on newer hardware configurations,
-    failing to boot or failing to detect some devices, some like SATA hard
+    failing to boot or failing to detect some devices such as some SATA hard
     drives.</para>
   </note>